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 <p>It makes you queasy.</p>
 <p>The audience surrounding the pedestal gasps at something</p>
-<p>&ldquo;The instances aren&rsquo;t the art, one of your friends mumbles, and you turn to them. They shrug. &ldquo;I don&rsquo;t think so at least. I don&rsquo;t actually know what the art is.&rdquo;</p>
-<p>Someone from across the pedestal offers, &ldquo;Maybe instances are the brush?&rdquo;</p>
-<p>Laughter.</p>
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+<dt>Friend 1</dt>
+<dd>The instances aren&rsquo;t the art. I don&rsquo;t think so at least. I don&rsquo;t actually know what the art is.</dd>
+<dt>Friend 2</dt>
+<dd>Maybe instances are the brush?</dd>
+<dt>Narrator 2</dt>
+<dd>Laughter.</dd>
 <dt>Dear</dt>
 <dd>Instances the brush, emotion the paint.</dd>
 <dt>Narrator 1</dt>
 <dd>The voice is familiar by now, and you aren&rsquo;t sure how you feel about that budding familiarity. Dear stands attentively nearby. </dd>
 <dt>Dear</dt>
 <dd>The art is the story behind it all. The art is&hellip;experiences?</dd>
-<dt>Narrator 1</dt>
-<dd>&ldquo;Was that a question?&rdquo; your friend asks.</dd>
+<dt>Friend 1</dt>
+<dd>Was that a question?</dd>
 <dt>Dear</dt>
 <dd>(bemused) I do not make art because I know why. If I knew why, I would not need to make art, then, would I?</dd>
-<dt>Narrator 1</dt>
-<dd>The friend laughs. &ldquo;So you&rsquo;re a romantic?&rdquo;</dd>
+<dt>Friend 2</dt>
+<dd>So you&rsquo;re a romantic?</dd>
 <dt>Dear</dt>
 <dd>(smug) Perhaps you should watch the exhibit again.</dd>
 <dt>Narrator 1</dt>
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