From dc6d759ab264bc232fb1610c65f1239b81f86562 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Mon, 15 Jan 2024 18:35:12 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 <p>((Waking World and Dry Grass))</p>
 <hr />
 <p>Letter after letter, topic after topic. They became rote. They became routine. They became a signature of Hammered Silver after every little decision that A Finger Pointing made which did not meet her standards. Every little decision that <em>anyone</em> made, if what True Name and Praiseworthy had to say was true.</p>
-<p>And it was not just her, after all, was it? For, when Motes first 
+<p>And it was not just her, after all, was it?</p>
+<p>For better or worse, she was the representative of her stanza. She was a synecdoche for it: she <em>was</em> the fifth stanza.
 ((the past: Motes))</p>
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 <p>((bitterness and compromises with Dry Grass))</p>