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Tycho Brahe#Artemis — They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie - 2174
- Experience - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
+- Experience - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — divvying up tasks (e.g: #Emissaries talk about politics, society, history, #Artemises talk about science, language, astronomy), forking, watching remote team head off, then forking and transiting DMZ border to welcome and orient emissaries. - 1307 (expand)
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — First entry into the meeting hall, a dome in the middle of a compound, disoriented, unable to fork, time feels weird, introduced and oriented, ey finds out about WAQ/AWNH switch, remembers what they were for, frown; AWNH and TN are kind of freaking out b/c time slipperiness feels like being lost. - 2403
- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — starts out simply recording, Tycho too overwhelmed to speak, notices Turun Ko, discusses roles during a lull, TN frowns, Emissaries are set up with sandbox sim for downtime however they please; catches up with Tycho and Sarah Genet about how learning is going (hint: everyone’s baffled) - 1875 (expand)
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- Interlude — Ioan and May (who indeed have a cry) discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it - 3319
- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how its impacting his view of the System and Artemis - 1920
- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watches TN try to have a discussion with Turun Ka regarding history, and it is an exercise in mutual misunderstanding, starting to feel out of his league with #Emissary being about social aspects - 1725
-- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — After watching similar discussion of TN misunderstanding, meets up with Sarah Genet over break, discusses note from Codrin#Emissary (day 3 lunch) - 2251
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — After watching similar discussion of TN misunderstanding, meets up with Sarah Genet over break, discusses note from Codrin#Emissary (day 3 lunch) - 2251
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Talks about current status during break, suggests ideas to Tycho about what he could be paying attention to re: politics/society/history in terms of the stars, leads to question of whether there were others that they’ve met along the way but didn’t join them arising, but told not to ask yet
- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Compares utility differences between forking/time manipulation (mostly Tycho, but also TN/WAQ) (day 3 after lunch)
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Compares political differences between forking/time manipulation (Mostly TN, but Codrin/Sarah), AWNH is acting strange
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Compares political differences between forking/time manipulation (Mostly TN, but Codrin/Sarah), AWNH is acting strange, sends note back to #Artemis hinting that it was Tycho that noticed
- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho, getting bored, directs talk to origins and path they’ve taken. Inexact answers, which has TN intrigued. She talks with the group after to discuss possibility that they might be being shady rather than just leaning on “oh we manipulate time” (day 3 after lunch/break)
- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — There’s a conversation between TN and Turun Ka around how the various races manage sentiment. Tycho is surprised at it being frank, Sarah suggests that she might be working on many levels, Codrin starting to worry about their sanity
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Discusses openly about news from Artemis and some of the problems the Systems have had in the past, Artemisians describe some of their own. AWNH and TN are both struggling now, each getting occasional flickers of Sasha/Michelle. They call a brief break, Turun Ko says take as long as you need b/c time is maleable, AWNH cries, refuses.