From df0df28477d494be4583dc5075facdba8da4de44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Thu, 14 Jul 2022 09:03:00 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/mitzvot/016.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/016.html b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/016.html index 33485f17a..7eb547af5 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/016.html +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/016.html @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@

Eir partner laughed and dotted her nose against eir cheek before settling down into her usual chair. “I am sorry that that was weird, and I am sorry that I ran away earlier. I was able to get a lot off my chest, and I feel much better for it. Oh, you did eat. That is okay, I did too, but I think these may make good dessert.”

May’s nearly manic voice and the tension in her cheeks showed something deeper going on beneath the surface, but given her chatter and the still-shocked look on True Name’s face, this didn’t seem to be the time.

“May Then My Name, I know that I–“

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“If you talk about earlier, I will hire Guōweī myself,” May interrupted mildly. “I promise that there will be time to talk about it soon, my dear, but for now, I need something else, alright?”

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“If you talk about earlier, I will hire Guōweī myself,” May interrupted sweetly. “I promise that there will be time to talk about it soon, my dear, but for now, I need something else, alright?”

“Of course,” True Name said, frowning. “In that case, what is in the package?”

“End Waking made these…corn…pancake things. Fritter cakes? Something like that. They were savory, but they might go well with honey as a sort of dessert. There are only two, but we can split them.”

Ioan and True Name exchanged a glance, then watched as May unwrapped the griddle cakes and swiped a pot of honey into being beside them. She broke off a piece, drizzled honey on it, and ate it.

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She shook her head beneath eir hand and tightened her grip around em. “I do not want to discuss them now. I am tired and cried out and you are comfortable and good to me.”