diff --git a/writing/post-self/marsh/004.html b/writing/post-self/marsh/004.html index 4741d691b..b992be37d 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/marsh/004.html +++ b/writing/post-self/marsh/004.html @@ -103,7 +103,8 @@
Shaking the confusing, conflicting memories of Dry Grass from my head, I sighed, letting my shoulders slump. “Lily really should be here, as well,” I grumbled. “But I get it. She’s…well, she’s Lily.”
She bowed stiffly. “Yes. It is okay, my dear. We are used to it, even this many years later.”
“Sorry all the same.”
-She made a setting aside gesture, dismissing the topic easily. “Another topic to discuss another time. Cress and Tule are grabbing coffee now, and will meet us in a few.”
+She made a setting aside gesture, dismissing the topic easily. “Another topic to discuss another time. Cress and Tule are grabbing coffee now, and will meet us in a few minutes.”
+We stood in silence, then, saying nothing and letting the sun warm the backs of our necks. A few people poked their heads out of various shops, looked around sullenly, and then disappeared. Everyone who passed us did so in a cone of silence, and most of those opaqued from the outside, hard-edged cones of darkened and blurred background gliding down the sidewalk, hiding faces and silencing words.
((they meet up and talk while sim hopping))
((After Dry Grass leaves, Reed goes to talk with Lily))