diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/004.html b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/004.html index 971d93294..140b4a32f 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/004.html +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-pollux/004.html @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@

Ey rolled eir eyes.

“Still, I really must find one soon. I am aware that it is not pleasant for you two when this happens, but it is also unpleasant for me when I do not have direction.”

Dear’s partner shrugged. “We just need to get one of those loose clamps for holding bags shut or hair back in a bun so we can just put it on your scruff when you start getting out of hand.”

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“Do you promise? I promise that I will do all in my power to deserve it,” it said, grinning wickedly.

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“Do you promise? I promise that I will do everything in my power to deserve it,” it said, grinning wickedly.

“Dear, I swear to God.”

“If you threaten me with a good time, you will win precisely the prize that you deserve.”

Codrin laughed. “You’re right. We deserve peace and quiet, sometimes.”

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“No, you are a ways off from me resenting you, but you are perilously close to me lying to you.”