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 <ul>
 <li><a href="#brief-outline">Brief outline</a><ul>
 <li><a href="#caduceus">Caduceus</a></li>
-<li><a href="#subplots">Subplots</a></li>
+<li><a href="#selected-letters-novella">Selected Letters (novella)</a></li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li><a href="#notes">Notes</a></li>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
 <li class="done0"> Choose love<ul>
 <li class="done0"> Ioan thinks aloud: &ldquo;Hey, TN won&rsquo;t just have May&rsquo;s memories wholesale, she&rsquo;ll have a synthesis of herself, May, and now EW&rdquo;</li>
 <li class="done0"> May agrees, thinks that knowing love is only ever going to be a good thing for TN, and memories of her resentment will open everything up</li>
-<li class="done0"> TN realizes that changing is probably the only real way out of all of this, and really? That&rsquo;s not so bad.</li>
+<li class="done0"> TN realizes that changing is probably the only real way out of all of this, and really? That&rsquo;s not so bad. Besides, maybe she has a plan, though not complete enough to share yet</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done0"> Plan/risk<ul>
@@ -150,28 +150,27 @@
 <li class="done0"> Grand gesture<ul>
 <li class="done0"> May merges down</li>
 <li class="done0"> Decision to individuate/change of name<ul>
-<li>Change name to When I Dream</li>
-<li>Change pronouns to they/them (rather likes the plurality involved, still feels that strongly with May and EW being so different from her)</li>
-<li>Appearance change, maybe white fur a la Dear? Shrug? Probably has to stay a skunk b/c she&rsquo;s now three in one. Gotta be something.</li>
+<li>Change name to Sasha to disarm Jonas</li>
+<li>Become spotted skunk, looks like Sasha again</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done0"> Payoff<ul>
-<li class="done0"> When I Dream works on finding a new purpose</li>
+<li class="done0"> Sasha works on finding a new purpose</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done0"> Epilogue <ul>
 <li class="done0"> Depending on how gay I&rsquo;m feeling, they might:<ul>
 <li>Live together</li>
 <li>Wind up in a relationship</li>
-<li>Simply part ways for WID to find her way in the world with May dropping her hatred</li>
+<li>Simply part ways for Sasha to find her way in the world with May dropping her hatred</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
-<h3 id="subplots">Subplots</h3>
+<h3 id="selected-letters-novella">Selected Letters (novella)</h3>
 <ul>
 <li>Codrin#Castor<ul>
 <li>Life in Convergence</li>
@@ -215,20 +214,20 @@
 </ul>
 <h2 id="outline">Outline</h2>
 <ul>
-<li class="done0"> Epigraph<ul>
-<li class="done0"> Numbers 15:31: (the being cut off part is good, but this equates jonas to god, so???)<ul>
+<li class="done1"> Epigraph<ul>
+<li class="rejected"> Numbers 15:31: (the being cut off part is good, but this equates jonas to god, so???)<ul>
 <li>NRSV: Because of having despised the word of the Lord and broken his commandment, such a person shall be utterly cut off and bear the guilt.</li>
 <li>Sefaria: Because it was the word of יהוה that was spurned and [God’s] commandment that was violated, that person shall be cut off—and bears the guilt.</li>
 <li>Alter: For he has spurned the word of the Lord and His commandment he has violated. That person shall surely be cut off, his crime is upon him.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li class="done0"> Exodus 23:7: (bit heavy handed wrt TN)<ul>
+<li class="done1"> Exodus 23:7: (bit heavy handed wrt TN)<ul>
 <li>NRSV: Keep far from a false charge, and do not kill the innocent and those in the right, for I will not acquit the guilty.</li>
 <li>Sefaria: Keep far from a false charge; do not bring death on those who are innocent and in the right, for I will not acquit the wrongdoer.</li>
 <li>Alter: From a lying word stay far away, and the guiltless and innocent do not kill, for I will not acquit the guilty.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li class="done0"> Deuteronomy 23:22-24: (pretty long, but I like the &ldquo;refrain from vowing&rdquo; bit)<ul>
+<li class="done2"> Deuteronomy 23:22-24: (pretty long, but I like the &ldquo;refrain from vowing&rdquo; bit, also equates Jonas to God)<ul>
 <li>NRSV (21-23): If you make a vow to the Lord your God, do not postpone fulfilling it; for the Lord your God will surely require it of you, and you would incur guilt. But if you refrain from vowing, you will not incur guilt. Whatever your lips utter you must diligently perform, just as you have freely vowed to the Lord your God with your own mouth.</li>
 <li>Sefaria: When you make a vow to your God יהוה, do not put off fulfilling it, for your God יהוה will require it of you, and you will have incurred guilt; whereas you incur no guilt if you refrain from vowing. You must fulfill what has crossed your lips and perform what you have voluntarily vowed to your God יהוה, having made the promise with your own mouth.</li>
 <li>Alter: Should you make a fow to the Lord your God,  you shall not delay fulfilling it, for the Lord your God will surely require it of you and there would be an offense in you. And you should refrain from making a vow, there will be no offense in you. The utterance of your lips you shall keep, and you shall do as you have vowed in the Lord your God, the freewill gift that you spoke with your mouth.</li>
@@ -238,15 +237,18 @@
 </li>
 <li class="done1"> Conversation &mdash; Ioan&rsquo;s been hanging out with TN, May is actively working on letting go, and has gotten to the point of being cordial, polite, occasionally kind<ul>
 <li class="done1"> <a href="ioan/001.html">Ioan</a> &mdash; Ioan and TN get coffee, which they&rsquo;ve been doing about once a month or so for a few years now.</li>
-<li class="done2"> <a href="sorina/001.html">Sorina</a> &mdash; Sorina writes Ioan directly.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done0"> Conflict &mdash; After assassination attempt on TN, learn about TN getting pushed out by Jonas, May offers to merge down, turns into big discussion<ul>
 <li class="done0"> (SNIPPET) <a href="ioan/0x1.html">Ioan</a> &mdash; EW merges down</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li class="done0"> Reconciliation &mdash; After the merge and TN&rsquo;s collapse, she has to process two centuries of memories while Ioan and May have to process the results of the merge<ul>
-<li class="done0"> (SNIPPET) <a href="ioan/0x2.html">Ioan</a> &mdash; True Name changes</li>
+<li class="done1"> Reconciliation &mdash; After the merge and TN&rsquo;s collapse, she has to process two centuries of memories while Ioan and May have to process the results of the merge<ul>
+<li class="done1"> (SNIPPET) <a href="ioan/0x2.html">Ioan</a> &mdash; True Name changes</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li class="done0"> Selected Letters<ul>
+<li class="done2"> <a href="sorina/001.html">Sorina</a> &mdash; Sorina writes Ioan directly.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>