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I still like the idea of having an open door somewhere in the image. Nice to have, but not required.

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  • #5 — After the merge, True Name has picked up May’s affectionate streak and gets all cozy on Ioan a couple of times (a few times as Sasha; see the characters section. The mood is kind of cuddly but also super awkward because neither of them know what to do about it at all given their history with her as True Name, but also May’s memories of her and Ioan together.
  • #6 — May gives a monologue at one point, looking drunken and melancholic in a bar-setting on a stage
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    Characters

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    Ioan Bălan
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    No change
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    Douglas Hadje
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    Tall, slim, curly black hair, tan skin (though, as he’s a Canadian, still a white guy).
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    May Then My Name/True Name/skunk-type Odists
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    No change - ref
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    Zacharias
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    A foppish red fox — dresses a bit like Dear, carries an affected cane
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    Jonas
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    Tall, slender, sandy blond hair that’s sort of artfully tousled but clearly done intentionally, well dressed, ‘perilously handsome’, slimy politician
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    Sasha
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    Shaped rather like True Name, but a spotted skunk, so a shorter almost weasel-like muzzle, shorter tail, white splotch on the forehead but not white headfur, white splotches at the eyes, a bit of stripes around the back of the neck heading beneath clothing Usually seen in a linen tunic and pair of Thai fisherman pants.
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    Samples referenced

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    Eventually, True Name’s shoulders sagged and she stumbled down from the trees, Ioan and May both watching her, wide-eyed. She kept walking past the trail, down onto muddy beech, then out into the water. The short waves lapped up against her legs, soaking her slacks, and still she kept walking until it had made its way nearly up to her waist.