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Wherein Maddy worries about how much space she’s allowed to take up and also waxes rhapsodic about how love is right at the margin of the terrifying through the lens of Time War and also Rilke. It’s also kinda about suicide???
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Do I speak too loud? Do I speak too often? Do I tread too close to that invisible line of being ‘too much’?
Am I too demanding? Do I need too much minding? Is the amount of attention I seem to seek above the norm, whatever that is?
Do I park myself in the corner of others’ minds? Do I sit cross-legged on the floor, a tripping hazard? Do I follow them around their thoughts, speaking? Or not speaking, yet nevertheless present?
+Is asking so many questions just feeding into that anxiety?