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+Turun Ka of firstrace, leadership
+Turun Ko of firstrace, recorder
+Stolon of thirdrace, scientist
+Iska of secondrace, representative
+Artante Diria of fourthrace, representative
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On the Origin of Our World
- Mythos - An Expanded Mythology of our World by May Then My Name Die With Me of the Ode clade
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- Tycho Brahe — Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she’s Answers Will Not Help.
- Codrin Bălan — Tycho, Sarah, have dinner with Codrin, Dear, Dear’s partner, talk about jobs, what they used to do, how odd it is to have one. Tycho gets message re: Artemisian culture and importance of time-bending, and shares with table, TN forks off to talk with engineers to ensure this can happen.
- Tycho Brahe — Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions.
-- Codrin Bălan — Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it’s glad to sit out, they talk about that
+- Codrin Bălan — Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it’s glad to sit out b/c its existence relies on being able to understand, they talk about that
- Tycho Brahe — They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie
- Act II - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — divvying up tasks (e.g: #Emissaries talk about politics, society, history, #Artemises talk about science, language, astronomy), forking, watching remote team head off, then forking and transiting DMZ border to welcome and orient emissaries.
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — First entry into the meeting hall, a dome in the middle of a compound, disoriented, unable to fork, time feels weird, introduced and oriented, ey finds out about WAQ/AWNH switch, remembers what they were for, frown; WAQ and TN are kind of freaking out b/c time slipperiness feels like being lost.
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — overwhelmed at meeting them all, introductions go around, working out specialties and such, gets a bit excited talking about astronomy and how much there is to learn, TN frowns
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — overwhelmed at meeting them all, introductions go around, working out specialties and such, gets a bit excited talking about astronomy and how much there is to learn, TN frowns, though she’s still struggling b/c lost-alike sensations
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — starts out simply recording, Tycho too overwhelmed to speak, notices Turun Ko, discusses roles during a lull, TN frowns
- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Tycho learns about time from Turun Ka and that this is how they managed to work fast: modifying time rather than forking
- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Emissaries are set up with sandbox sim for downtime however they please; catches up with Tycho and Sarah Genet about how learning is going (hint: everyone’s baffled)
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Exchanges notes with Codrin#Artemis, hinting at swap with WAQ/AWNH
- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how its impacting his view of the System and Artemis
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watches TN try to have a discussion with Turun Ka regarding history, and it is an exercise in mutual misunderstanding, starting to feel out of his league with #Artemis being about social aspects
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — After watching similar discussion of TN misunderstanding, meets up with Sarah Genet over break, discusses note from Codrin#Emissary
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Talks about current status during break, suggests ideas to Tycho about what he could be paying attention to re: politics/society/history in terms of the stars, leads to question of whether there were others that they’ve met along the way but didn’t join them arising, but told not to ask yet
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Compares utility differences between forking/time manipulation (mostly Tycho, but also TN/AWNH)
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Compares political differences between forking/time manipulation (Mostly TN, but Codrin/Sarah), WAQ is acting strange
+- … (more room for TN manipulations)
- Act III - manipulations fail b/c whoops the Artemisians are way, way better at this
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how he’s reevaluating the History.
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — WAQ breaks down (revealing she’s WAQ, not AWNH), quits, break immediately called, TN is having a REALLY HARD TIME, Turun Ka shows up, TN comes clean, talks about getting lost, Turun Ka says Artante’s race ran into similar, but stops her from talking about WAQ further for now
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — While all the above is happening, Tycho steals some time with Stolon to try and talk science, but they both wind up talking about being in over one’s head and the futility of politics vs stability of science
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Part way through a talk on languages (AWNH has learned a lot about this), TN gets news re: WAQ (a fork enters the space, quits, merges - Artemisians like huh???), calls halt to meeting, preempts everyone getting news separately by announcing what happened, tries to gloss over the swap quickly (b/c of course she’s planned), but Turun Ka speaks up, says that this is part of confirmation required. For what? Tune in next time…
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Codrin, Sarah, Turun Ko, Artante meet up (while TN talks with Turun Ka, Iska, and Tycho chills with Stolon) and discuss actual point of meetings: to determine whether humanity is a suitable fifthrace. None of the Artemisians know/will say what the gating factors are, but think they’re close - don’t tell TN (are they supposed to know? Shrug, but implied if they tell TN, that’s a point against them)
- Interlude - Ioan and May speculate on how True Name must be taking it locally/Pollux, suggest Codrin’s grand gesture for Dear being bringing the polycule to the DMZ, no more house on the prairie.
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World (against TN’s suggestion, but she is in damage-control mode), which, after (pronoun) reads it, turns out to be the final step towards moving forward with accepting as fifthrace. Yay Codrin
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Steals time with Stolon on break, joined by Iska and Sarah, talk about joining Artemis, what races have learned from each other re: science.
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watching talks resume, starting to think y’know what, fuck it, maybe he’ll just stay if allowed. Stolon’s neat, the science is good, and having this to look forward to has given him more purpose in life. Interrupts talk to mention such regardless of glares from TN. Silence from Artemisians, one can assume internal chatter, then “that was the final gating step - wanting to join. We will welcome you as fifthrace” - from there they will learn all they want, have X days to do exchange, share entire libraries back and forth on data band, can keep format however they want on Castor. TN FROWNS but WHATEVER FINE
- Conclusion - DMZ expands, several upload to Artemis
-- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos
+- Tycho Brahe — Fresh out of talks, returns to his sim, looks up at the sky, new big feelings, TN shows up w/champagne. She’s kind of sad, but guess it went okay, says she’s trying to be earnest about just wanting to have something to celebrate with someone else, but isn’t sure she knows how anymore.
+- Codrin Bălan — Talks with Sarah about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace)
+- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc
+- Tycho Brahe — The DMZ expands, sets up a border crossing of sorts, starts to think about what to do, about how there’s this idea that he invest fully that just showed up, fully formed, in his head
+- Codrin Bălan — Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ and on Artemis (Do they stay? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn’t even care if they do) - Will ey write a history? No, that’s for Genet, ey’s done. Ey might become a librarian!!!!
- Epilogue - Tycho invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha’s eulogy
-(True Name tries to guide the talks toward simply finding out more information thinking of gaining the upper hand to prepare for some sort of exchange, then simply to tries maintaining control over the situation, but for once, she’s out of her league. Doesn’t help that the looseness of time on Artemis feels a lot like getting lost at first. Tycho gets more and more brave. Turns out all they want to see if humans are suitable to become fifthrace and suggestion that they be welcomed onto the LV similarly if so - basically ensuring greater continuity of all races (similar to TN/Jonas’s stated goals, stated later). WAQ/AWNH discovered, Turun Ka accepts in stride, had been watching for such to better gauge humanity and how they work. To that end, Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World against True Name’s suggestions, which is the final step to moving forward with the plans - yay Codrin)
+(True Name tries to guide the talks toward simply finding out more information thinking of gaining the upper hand to prepare for some sort of exchange or power imbalance, then simply to tries maintaining control over the situation, but for once, she’s out of her league. Their goal is basically ensuring greater continuity of all races (similar to TN/Jonas’s stated goals, stated later))