From f43c95c87f684fb75e3984f12335e0461c15bc4a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Rye Progress <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Thu, 3 Oct 2024 22:03:59 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 <p>Excitement spiked.</p>
 <p>Terror spiked.</p>
 <p>Wonder and curiosity and exploration spiked.</p>
-<p>And the, before she could even turn to meet her shadow, a weight slammed into her back, and a sharp, blinding pain shot through her chest. </p>
+<p>And then, before she could even turn to meet her shadow, a weight slammed into her back, and a sharp, blinding pain shot through her chest. </p>
 <p>Her breath was forced out of her in a single puff, leaving her lungs emptier than she had ever felt them before. Air was gone from her, it felt. It felt as though she would never breathe again. </p>
 <p>All the same, as though to preempt her crying out, a paw reached over her shoulder and clamped down painfully tight on her snout.</p>
 <p>&ldquo;Hush now,&rdquo; a voice whispered soothingly against her cheek, warm breath tickling fur where it bunched up against her assailant&rsquo;s fingers. &ldquo;Just be quiet. Just settle down. I have you. I am with you.&rdquo;</p>