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 <li>General plot:<ul>
 <li>Agree to fall into trajectories that aren&rsquo;t diverging so quickly (using attitude jets and angling solar sail, though Castor is still moving slower and has little chance to catch up/aliens don&rsquo;t want to slow down)</li>
-<li>Aliens upload into dmz to meet with Tycho, Codrin, Answers Will Not Help, and True Name. Lots of discussions</li>
+<li>Aliens upload into dmz to meet with Tycho, Codrin, Answers Will Not Help, and True Name. Lots of discussions.</li>
+<li>Tangents throughout: what were the effects of the history/mythology project?</li>
 <li>Tycho, Codrin, Why Ask Questions, and True Name upload into similar DMZ on the remote ship. Lots of discussions</li>
 <li>Begins with a lot of learning about each other</li>
 <li>Shifts to gentle nudges this way and that to information sent between the two ships and between DMZ and System as a whole</li>
 <li>Shifts from there to gentle nudges back and forth on each others&rsquo; societies</li>
 <li>Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each?</li>
-<li>Denouement? Who&rsquo;s upset? Who&rsquo;s happy? Why</li>
+<li>Denouement: Who&rsquo;s upset? Who&rsquo;s happy? Why? What&rsquo;s next?</li>
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