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                 <p><span class="tag">writing</span> <span class="tag">fiction</span> <span class="tag">scifi</span> <span class="tag">novel</span> <span class="tag">chapter</span> <span class="tag">post-self</span> <span class="tag">qoheleth</span></p>
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 <p>She cried again/cried again. Sat on the ground again/sat on the ground again. Plucked a dandelion/plucked a dandelion. Again/again. Always twice over.</p>
 <p>"Sasha!" She spoke aloud.</p>
 <p>"The fuck." Half question this time.</p>
-<p>"Sasha, it's Debarre," she said, then, "What the fuck?"</p>
+<p>"Sasha, it's Debarre," she said. Then: "What the fuck?"</p>
 <p>"I'm so sorry. I came as fast as I could. Everything's a fucking mess."</p>
 <p>"How long has it been?" she asked herself.</p>
 <p>"About sixteen hours. I had to dump a chunk of my savings into a ticket to get here."</p>
