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If you race only with foot-runners and they exhaust you, how then can you compete with horses? If you are secure only in a tranquil land, how will you fare in the jungle of the Jordan? — Jeremiah 12:5
- Act I - leading up to the arrival of the Artemisians
+- Act I - leading up to the arrival of the Artemisians
- Tycho Brahe — Tycho seeks out Codrin to tell em what happened. - 1481
- Codrin Bălan — After coping ahead w/ Tycho, Codrin expresses worries with Dear - 1896
- Tycho Brahe — Tycho returns back to home sim to find True Name - 2698
@@ -115,11 +115,11 @@ Artante Diria of fourthrace, representative
- Tycho Brahe — Tycho, True Name, Answers Will Not Help, other astronomer (Paolo Verda), and System tech (Sovanna Soun) fork to basically create a massive workforce to get all this done as fast as possible, .com - 1924
- Codrin Bălan — Meets up with the Artemis team at dinner, somewhat tense around True Name, but learns a bit more about the current status and how well under control it is (or how tightly controlled Odists are keeping it) - 2168
- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss news, but also Codrin’s notes about feeling dragged along - 1846
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she’s Answers Will Not Help.
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she’s Answers Will Not Help. - 1758
- Codrin Bălan — Tycho#Tasker, Sarah, have dinner with Codrin, Dear, Dear’s partner, talk about jobs, what they used to do, how odd it is to have one. Tycho gets message re: Artemisian culture and importance of time-bending, and shares with table, Tycho says TN forks off to talk with engineers to ensure this can happen.
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions.
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — The response to their questions from Artemis.
- Codrin Bălan — Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it’s glad to sit out b/c its existence relies on being able to understand, they talk about that
-- Tycho Brahe#artemis — They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie
+- Tycho Brahe#artemis — Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions. They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie
- Act II - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share