From f7cebf0d49ffb7f3aaa9790737af974aee180a16 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <mscottclary@nvidia.com>
Date: Wed, 27 Oct 2021 16:01:11 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 writing/post-self/neviim/index.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
index 5f4f1c397..9be9168ff 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ Artante Diria of fourthrace, representative</p>
 <li class="done4"> <em>If you race only with foot-runners and they exhaust you, how then can you compete with horses? If you are secure only in a tranquil land, how will you fare in the jungle of the Jordan?</em> &mdash; Jeremiah 12:5</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li class="done1"> Act I - leading up to the arrival of the Artemisians<ul>
+<li class="done2"> Act I - leading up to the arrival of the Artemisians<ul>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="local/tycho/001.html">Tycho Brahe</a> &mdash; Tycho seeks out Codrin to tell em what happened. - 1481</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="local/codrin/001.html">Codrin Bălan</a> &mdash; After coping ahead w/ Tycho, Codrin expresses worries with Dear - 1896</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="local/tycho/002.html">Tycho Brahe</a> &mdash; Tycho returns back to home sim to find True Name - 2698</li>
@@ -115,11 +115,11 @@ Artante Diria of fourthrace, representative</p>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="local/tycho/004.html">Tycho Brahe</a> &mdash; Tycho, True Name, Answers Will Not Help, other astronomer (Paolo Verda), and System tech (Sovanna Soun) fork to basically create a massive workforce to get all this done as fast as possible, .com - 1924</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="local/codrin/004.html">Codrin Bălan</a> &mdash; Meets up with the Artemis team at dinner, somewhat tense around True Name, but learns a bit more about the current status and how well under control it is (or how tightly controlled Odists are keeping it) - 2168</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="interlude/001.html">Interlude</a> - Ioan and May discuss news, but also Codrin&rsquo;s notes about feeling dragged along - 1846</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="local/tycho/005.html">Tycho Brahe#Artemis</a> &mdash; Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she&rsquo;s Answers Will Not Help.</li>
+<li class="done2"> <a href="local/tycho/005.html">Tycho Brahe#Artemis</a> &mdash; Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she&rsquo;s Answers Will Not Help. - 1758</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="local/codrin/005.html">Codrin Bălan</a> &mdash; Tycho#Tasker, Sarah, have dinner with Codrin, Dear, Dear&rsquo;s partner, talk about jobs, what they used to do, how odd it is to have one. Tycho gets message re: Artemisian culture and importance of time-bending, and shares with table, Tycho says TN forks off to talk with engineers to ensure this can happen.</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="local/tycho/006.html">Tycho Brahe#Artemis</a> &mdash; Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions.</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="local/tycho/006.html">Tycho Brahe#Artemis</a> &mdash; The response to their questions from Artemis.</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="local/codrin/006.html">Codrin Bălan</a> &mdash; Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it&rsquo;s glad to sit out b/c its existence relies on being able to understand, they talk about that</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="local/tycho/007.html">Tycho Brahe#artemis</a> &mdash; They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who&rsquo;s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="local/tycho/007.html">Tycho Brahe#artemis</a> &mdash; Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions. They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who&rsquo;s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done0"> Act II - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share<ul>