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 Chace, Joseph<br />
 systime 167 (2291)</p>
 <h2 id="abstract">Abstract</h2>
-<p>Founded in 2115 (nine years prior to systime 0), the world commonly known as the System has exploded in population to an estimated twenty-seven billion individuals with countless more instances forked from those core identities. A world that is stable, beyond scarcity, and beyond even death, appeals to a great many people. The transition of religions and spirituality from life on earth to the System has been less smooth, however. We intend to explore the incidence and applicability of a wide array of generalized religious beliefs as they occur in societies built of immortal individuals, comparing them against their mortal roots on Earth.</p>
+<p>Founded in 2115 (nine years prior to systime 0), the world commonly known as the System has exploded in population to an estimated twenty-seven billion individuals with countless more instances forked from those core identities. A world that is stable, beyond scarcity, and beyond even death, appeals to a great many people. The transition of religions and spirituality from life on earth to the System has been less smooth, however. We intend to explore the incidence and applicability of a wide array of generalized religious beliefs as they occur in societies built of immortal individuals, comparing them against their mortal roots on Earth. Through this survey we hope to hope to divine what aspects of spiritual life are bound to a reality bound to physicality and mortality.</p>
 <h2 id="introduction">Introduction</h2>
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