writing fiction furry fantasy erotica
- Two young critters
- (Teru)Ata (M) and (Tenu)Ana (F)
- been friends forever, expected to marry
- made it past puberty, now in the Four Year Trial, four years after puberty of remaining virginal to understand restraint, hormones, etc.
- Ana 4th year, Ata 3rd year, but same age, hit puberty different years
- Basically 16 or 17
- Happy, bit rebellious
- Hunting tribe
- Game always work to get, but has been scarce this year
- Venturing further and further afield to hunt
- Concern over getting enough for winter
- Lives in a valley in the mountains
- Undefined species named only for the tribe (Ja-Inda) but vaguely catlike
- Always told to stay away from the second ridge
- A small outcropping of rock visible from the first ridge
- Always wanted to go there, but had been good so far
- With food pressure plus rebelliousness, venture over to the ridge
- Near the ridge, notice a scent, or a non-scent, something that tickles the nose
- Start to get hotter and hotter
- Ana strips shirt, panting, whining
- Both start to loose higher reasoning
- Needs overwhelm reason and they fuck
- And fuck again, getting tired
- And fuck again, starting to hurt
- Start again, nearly losing consciousness
- Passing out, hear a loud bonging of some sort of bell
- Awake back in the village
- Chastened for venturing near the ridge
- Four year trial not considered broken, but extended for another year
- Lucky to be alive
- Explanation of two types of Ja-Inda - ones like them, Ja-Inda-Re who go through ovulation, and ones like the Ja-Inda-Ra, who go through estrus
- The scents of estrus drive the Ja-Inda-Re into a heat-like state
- Can be dangerous, fuck until dead, sort of thing
- Ja-Inda-Ra sent away for the estrus years (only about twenty, life span of sixty)
- Occasionally come back with youngsters, who are welcomed into the tribe
- No one's sure where they come from, maybe men from the tribe wandering over, or another tribe
- Tolerated out of needs of the tribe: small, can't afford to lose members