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(foraging after fishing)
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Idea: The terror of a sudden addition of a new, unknowable sense.
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Idea: The terror of a sudden addition of a new, unknowable sense.
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Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes incense and lives a life of prayer, foraging and fishing. Some animal - marten, maybe? "He sat in the sun and was greatly warmed, and by this he had always surmised that his fur was of a particular quality that the sun was drawn to, for there were parts of his surroundings that rejected and repelled the sun." Spend at least a few thousand words on day to day life and small challenges.
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Story of a blind-from-birth character in a solipsist world, only one, makes incense and lives a life of prayer, foraging and fishing. Some animal - fisher, maybe? "He sat in the sun and was greatly warmed, and by this he had always surmised that his fur was of a particular quality that the sun was drawn to, for there were parts of his surroundings that rejected and repelled the sun." Spend at least a few thousand words on day to day life and small challenges.
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Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave him sight"? That makes the opening a series of observances.
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Conflict: a fae character (presence?) gives him sight - the narrator? "I gave him sight"? That makes the opening a series of observances.
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* On Lyut's life
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* On Lyut's life
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* [On making incense](making-incense)
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* [On making incense](making-incense)
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* On foraging and fishing
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* [On foraging and fishing](foraging)
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* On going to bed hungry and subsisting on the smoke of prayer
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* [On going to bed hungry and subsisting on the smoke of prayer](hunger)
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* On cycles, days, sun, heat
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* [On cycles, days, weeks/Zita, sun, heat, seasons](cycles-heat)
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* Confounding with sight
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* Confounding with sight
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