update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/toledot/launch/launch/Codrin-castor/004.md

@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ Codrin frowned. "Most everyone I talked to was as ambivalent about the launch as
 
 "Correct."
 
-"What about who was having those arguments."
+"What about who was having those arguments?"
 
 "That's the thing, there were relatively few voices from those who had uploaded recently. Most of those who started the arguments were from the first few decades of the System's creation. I suspect that at least part of their concern is that they still feel somewhat upset at having to pay to join, some of them dearly so, but even that doesn't feel like the whole reason. It was just all these super old uploads, both individuals and clades, who seemed less than thrilled at the prospect. Founder types, you understand."
 
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ Was this another lie from Dear, or had the fox simply not gone looking for names
 
 "I'm not sure," Codrin said, mouth dry. "Perhaps it was more of an image thing? As in, adding the module might damage how others viewed the launch."
 
-"Perhaps." Ey heard Brahe shrug against the moss-grass, then continue. "Anyway, that's the story. I don't know if it'll be of any use to you in your project."
+"Perhaps." Ey heard Brahe shrug against the moss-grass before he continued. "Anyway, that's the story. I don't know if it'll be of any use to you in your project."
 
 "It might. It already answered most of my other questions, too. The last one I have is that you invested entirely in the LVs. Why?"