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# Surprise day 2
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# MFA --- Surprise day 2 --- Jennifer Knox
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1. Possession --- reader can see the subject everywhere in the setting
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* Tracers, Echoes, Reflections, Mutations
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* Too many suits move in too many lines.
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They circle banquet tables, hawk-eyed,
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hunting crudites, canapés, bruscheta.
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Fingers ferry food, flipperlike, finding
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Fingers ferry food --- fish, perhaps --- finding
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slack-jawed mouths already open,
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squawking at wayward children
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or bemoaning The Market,
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doing all they can to convince each other
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through well-rehearsed performances,
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that this must be the case.
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The bereaved already sit graveside, silent.
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The silently bereaved already sit graveside.
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2. Tigers and clouds
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* Specific vs nonspecific
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* Everything/everybody is a ratio of tigers to clouds
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* Attention suggests worthiness, power, love
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* Misdirection = conscious or unconscious
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* Surprise = expectations
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* The automatic brain says "That *deserves*
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* Fact: the more numerous your specifics are, the more likely they are to be wrong or a lie (paper)
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