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%title The Second Ridge :writing:fiction:furry:fantasy:erotica:

  • Two young critters
    • (Teru)Ata (M) and (Tenu)Ana (F)
    • been friends forever, expected to marry
    • made it past puberty, now in the Four Year Trial, four years after puberty of remaining virginal to understand restraint, hormones, etc.
    • Ana 4th year, Ata 3rd year, but same age, hit puberty different years
    • Basically 16 or 17
    • Happy, bit rebellious
  • Hunting tribe
    • Game always work to get, but has been scarce this year
    • Venturing further and further afield to hunt
    • Concern over getting enough for winter
    • Lives in a valley in the mountains
    • Undefined species named only for the tribe (Ja-Inda) but vaguely catlike
  • Always told to stay away from the second ridge
    • A small outcropping of rock visible from the first ridge
    • Always wanted to go there, but had been good so far
    • With food pressure plus rebelliousness, venture over to the ridge
  • Near the ridge, notice a scent, or a non-scent, something that tickles the nose
    • Start to get hotter and hotter
    • Ana strips shirt, panting, whining
    • Both start to loose higher reasoning
    • Needs overwhelm reason and they fuck
    • And fuck again, getting tired
    • And fuck again, starting to hurt
    • Start again, nearly losing consciousness
    • Passing out, hear a loud bonging of some sort of bell
  • Awake back in the village
    • Chastened for venturing near the ridge
    • Four year trial not considered broken, but extended for another year
    • Lucky to be alive
  • Explanation of two types of Ja-Inda - ones like them, Ja-Inda-Re who go through ovulation, and ones like the Ja-Inda-Ra, who go through estrus
    • The scents of estrus drive the Ja-Inda-Re into a heat-like state
    • Can be dangerous, fuck until dead, sort of thing
    • Ja-Inda-Ra sent away for the estrus years (only about twenty, life span of sixty)
    • Occasionally come back with youngsters, who are welcomed into the tribe
    • No one's sure where they come from, maybe men from the tribe wandering over, or another tribe
    • Tolerated out of needs of the tribe: small, can't afford to lose members