zk/diary/2022-07-04-poetry.md

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Poetry workshop

  • G: Given circumstances (Lagrange w/ Jonas being a shit)
  • O: Objective (Continuity)
  • A: Action (Manipulate society/history to ensure others want the same)
  • T: Tactics (Shape info, influence individuals, stay observant)
  • Forms:
    • Sestina:
      • Good for convincing
      • 39 line poem, repetition of words
      • 6 stanzas, words all the same, shifting within stanzas
      • Lends to conversations over time
      • 7th stanza - envoy, 3 lines, two words per line
      • See: Ethel's Sestina
    • Sonnet p8:
      • Venting, encouraging, informing, educating
      • Giving advice, monologues, memories
    • Pantoum p62:
      • Intimidate, dismiss, questioning
      • 4 line stanza, 2+4 same as 1+3 in next stanza
    • Haiku:
      • Seduce, flatter
      • Seduction, flattery, eulogizing
    • Ghazal:
      • Demand, advocate
      • Self advocacy, demand for autonomy, argument
      • 5 stanzas, same length, each line end has radif
      • Each line a rhyming word
    • Villanelle:
      • good gossip, emphasis, repeating lines

Dear's sestina

6 words to repeat:

  1. Forget
  2. Change
  3. Story
  4. Laugh
  5. Snark
  6. Why

Intro: We have not spoken but for suggestions in missives for thirty years, and now you ask me why I am leaving.

  • 1: Remember Qoheleth? Poor fool could never forget

  • 2: Never realized that he still had change.

  • 3: Never cared, despite his job, his own story.

  • 4: RemembeR? Do you remember and laugh?

  • 5: I know that all my words are bound in snark

  • 6: But all that hides is asking why.

  • 6: My dear, did you ever ask why?

  • 1: Sure, you knew the reasons, the drive to forget,

  • 5: And you know the how, because of course. My snark

  • 2: Is here to obscure. I am not sorry. I will not change.

  • 4: Only, I wonder. When he died, did you laugh?

  • 3: Cry? Sigh? In the night, tell yourself a story?

  • 3: I, artist of nonsense, will ever tell my stories.

  • 6: The stories of too many reasons why

  • 4: You took your bet. For some of them, I laugh.

  • 1: Sad laughs, laughs where you shake your head. Forget!

  • 2: Silly man, but sillier bet. You, also, must change.

  • 5: I cannot demand, I am not you. Only hint, smile, snark.

  • 5: Again, I do not apologize for such snark,

  • 3: And were I more polite, only thank you for the story.

  • 2: At my lowest, I might sigh, nod, hope for change.

  • 6: I am not low. I am a perhaps-polite, I bow and ask for whys.

  • 1: I have done my work, my level best to forget,

  • 4: So I only hope for reasons, reassurance, commiserating laughter.

  • 4: How silly! Hopping to hear you, of all, laugh.

  • 5: But nothing else will cut through snark.

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