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%title The Consequences of Dissonance :writing:fiction:novel:book:sexuality:romance:

ABANDONED

In which Maddy tried NaNoWriMo once.

Dramatis Personae:

  • Cory Rasmussen - main character - Andrew, a bit taller & skinnier
  • Jared - step dad - ???
  • ???Mr. Paulsen - highschool band teacher
  • Mark - Cory's RA - Shane w/ Lon's voice
  • Eric - other music major, future roommate - David fr choir
  • Joseph - art major, future roommate - Kiran but white
  • Jamen - art major, future roommate, future crush after girl - Kory, a little shorter
  • Kris(tal) Careen - girlfriend - Krystal from HS w/ Jill's hair/fashion
  • Erin - Kris' roommate, winds up with Eric - Shannon-ish
  • Dante - Kris' ex - sorta like Steve

Outline

  1. Exposition
    1. Introduction in the tonic
      • Cory moves th college
      • Conversation with mom in car on way to dorm - hopes/fears, homophobia
      • Distance from home
      • Money - past experiences - coming out
      • Highschool experiences
      • Recent money trouble in family
    2. First Theme in the tonic
      • First semester in college - first classes
      • Meets girl - MPDG
    3. Transition and modulation
      • Thanksgiving break
      • Mild strife with family
    4. Second theme in the dominant
      • Settling into school
      • Cultivating fears about relationship via thinking too much
      • Salvia doesn't help
    5. Codetta in the dominant
      • Finals week
      • Saying goodbye
  2. Development
    • ... (First half of semester)
      • Things get hairy
      • Expr with drugs
      • cut off financially
      • search for job
      • relationship troubles
    • Transition and modulation
      • Spring break
      • More strife with family
  3. Recapitulation
    1. First theme in the tonic
      • Things start to fall apart
      • Relationship ends
      • Bad trip
      • Money trouble
      • Winter break (via conversations)
    2. Transition without modulation
      • Finals week and moving into summer
      • Moving into cheap apartment with friends
    3. Second theme in the tonic
      • Talking with other people
      • Trying to find closure on relationship
      • Possibly beginning a new relationship (best friend++)
    4. Coda in the tonic
      • Letter from ex reprinted in entirety

Scenes and status

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  2. Development
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  3. Recapitulation