update from sparkleup

writing/post-self/toledot/index.html

@@ -33,12 +33,12 @@
 <li>Yared Zerezghi<ul>
 <li>Phys-side System tech</li>
 <li>Campaigns for individual rights for Sys-side individuals, with the caveat of secession</li>
-<li>Followws arc of Paul from Toledot Yeshu: doesn&rsquo;t actually really like the system. Wants it to not be a part of the world, but is willing to cause the split through subterfuge</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Yosef Demma<ul>
-<li>NWAC (Northwest African Coalition) politician</li>
+<li>NEAC (NorthEest African Coalition) politician</li>
 <li>Hires Yared to induce the secession from Phys-side</li>
+<li>Followws arc of Paul from Toledot Yeshu: doesn&rsquo;t actually really like the system. Wants it to not be a part of the world, but is willing to cause the split through subterfuge</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
@@ -75,9 +75,9 @@
 <li>Diiistant cousin of Michelle, always feels some strange connection to her, too shy to communicate</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>~de (because why not be goofy with names, it&rsquo;s the dang future)~<ul>
-<li>~Member of Luddite collective~</li>
-<li>~Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and rapidly depopulating, and it resents that.~</li>
+<li>REJECTED: too many characters. de (because why not be goofy with names, it&rsquo;s the dang future)<ul>
+<li>Member of Luddite collective</li>
+<li>Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and rapidly depopulating, and it resents that.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>Offline<ul>
 <li>Douglas struggles with being a hermit/launch tech/coordinator but also wanting to talk with Michelle - basically his whole POV is the tech aspect of the launch, while also providing history of life outside since secession</li>
-<li>~~~de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don&rsquo;t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.~~~</li>
+<li><em>REJECTED: too many characters.</em> de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don&rsquo;t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.</li>
 <li>Kind of wondering if de should just be told through Douglas. Already a lot of characters.</li>
 <li>PAYOFF: tied with May Then My Name&rsquo;s histories, a renewed sense of adventure outside of the mind</li>
 </ul>
@@ -154,18 +154,18 @@
 <li class="done2"> <a href="launch/phys/Douglas/001.html">Launch: phys-side: Douglas</a> - Douglas feels a feel while working on the launch - 1021 - TODO merge with below</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="launch/phys/Douglas/002.html">Launch: phys-side: Douglas</a> - Douglas and May write to each other about the launch - 2722</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="secession/sys/Michelle/001.html">Secession: sys-side: Michelle</a> - Michelle dies among her clade, passing on tasks to first lines (True Name gets launch?) - 1131</li>
-<li class="rejected"> <a href="launch/phys/de/001.html">Launch: phys-side: de</a> - REJECTED: de no longer a POV character - Disappointed that launch went through regardless, walks the station in a daze, thinking backwards from current thought - 887~</li>
+<li class="rejected"> <a href="launch/phys/de/001.html">Launch: phys-side: de</a> - REJECTED: de no longer a POV character - Disappointed that launch went through regardless, walks the station in a daze, thinking backwards from current thought - 887</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="secession/phys/Yared/001.html">Secession: phys-side: Yared</a> - Yared uploads, the final before secession - 3080</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="launch/launch/Codrin-green/001.html">Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Green</a> - The triad tell each other fictional stories around the remnants of the fire of why they left no forks - 2599</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="secession/sys/Michelle/002.html">Secession: sys-side: Michelle</a> - Michelle meets with Council of Eight, discusses spending a bunch of reputation to fork; meets up with Jonas and pledges True Name - 2293</li>
-<li class="done2"> <a href="secession/phys/Yared/002.html">Secession: phys-side: Yared</a> - Yared gives a speech on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608</li>
+<li class="done2"> <a href="secession/phys/Yared/002.html">Secession: phys-side: Yared</a> - Yared gives a &lsquo;speech&rsquo; on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="launch/phys/Douglas/003.html">Launch: phys-side: Douglas</a> - Douglas answers May&rsquo;s questions - 3489</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done1"> Part II - Progression<ul>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="launch/sys/Ioan/003.html">Launch: sys-side: Ioan</a> - Ioan(s) and May start to parcel out work, but get off topic onto feelings. - 2644</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="secession/phys/Yared/003.html">Secession: phys-side: Yared</a> - first change from Yosef, talking with True Name and Jonas - 2791</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="secession/sys/True-Name/001.html">Secession: sys-side: True Name</a> - brings news of the bill to Council of Eight, talks with Debarre about names - 0</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="secession/sys/True-Name/001.html">Secession: sys-side: True Name</a> - brings news of the bill to Council of Eight, discuss speciation, trash heap (name?) waxes philosophical re: are they alive if they cannot procreate - 0</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="launch/launch/Codrin-blue/001.html">Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Blue</a> - Codrin#Blue interviews Dear about why it actually uploaded.</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="launch/launch/Codrin-green/002.html">Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Green</a> - Codrin#Green writes eir thoughts on why Dear may have uploaded (showing divergences).</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="launch/sys/Ioan/004.html">Launch: sys-side: Ioan</a> - Ioan interviews May about why she stayed behind</li>