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<li>Bridge the gap from abstract to concrete, exteriority to interiority</li>
<li>Appositive clarifies the meaning of a sentence</li>
<li>Provides essential or additional but not redundant, adds context</li>
<li>Good for settings/moods rather than dialogue or action</li>
<li>Helps in identifying other nouns</li>
<li>&ldquo;The tree, <em>a jack pine,</em> sloughed the snow from its branches as if it was waking up.&rdquo;<ul>
<li>uses language to imbue additional characteristics </li>
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<li>Questions:<ul>
<li>How much is intuitive vs deliberate? &mdash; Deliberate mostly in revision, intuitive in writing. In revision, can force it into consciousness</li>
<li>Are there styles that work better in certain genres, or are they genre agnostic? &mdash; <em>Can</em> span genres, but depends on authorial intent (e.g: minimalism, focus on plot, etc). Be strategic, be careful (e.g: if you have two compound sentences, consider a simple sentence). Use tension to speak about bigger/vaguer/more fluid things. Use tension to avoid didactic writing.</li>
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