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@@ -910,9 +910,11 @@ Seeing the cool blue hues of the scene above the final pedestal brings an immedi
 Embarrassment. Frustration. Anger. Loneliness. All in equal measure.</p>
 <p>NARRATOR 1
 It makes you queasy.
-The audience surrounding the pedestal gasps at something
-&ldquo;The instances aren&rsquo;t the art, one of your friends mumbles, and you turn to them. They shrug. &ldquo;I don&rsquo;t think so at least. I don&rsquo;t actually know what the art is.&rdquo;
-Someone from across the pedestal offers, &ldquo;Maybe instances are the brush?&rdquo;</p>
+The audience surrounding the pedestal gasps at something</p>
+<p>FRIEND 1
+The instances aren&rsquo;t the art. I don&rsquo;t think so at least. I don&rsquo;t actually know what the art is.</p>
+<p>FRIEND 2
+Maybe instances are the brush?</p>
 <p>Laughter.</p>
 <p>DEAR
 Instances the brush, emotion the paint.</p>
@@ -920,13 +922,13 @@ Instances the brush, emotion the paint.</p>
 The voice is familiar by now, and you aren&rsquo;t sure how you feel about that budding familiarity. Dear stands attentively nearby. </p>
 <p>DEAR
 The art is the story behind it all. The art is&hellip;experiences?</p>
-<p>NARRATOR 1
-&ldquo;Was that a question?&rdquo; your friend asks.</p>
+<p>FRIEND 1
+Was that a question?</p>
 <p>DEAR
 (bemused)
 I do not make art because I know why. If I knew why, I would not need to make art, then, would I?</p>
-<p>NARRATOR 1
-The friend laughs. &ldquo;So you&rsquo;re a romantic?&rdquo;</p>
+<p>FRIEND 2
+So you&rsquo;re a romantic?</p>
 <p>DEAR
 (smugly)
 Perhaps you should watch the exhibit again.</p>
@@ -1051,7 +1053,7 @@ Two things, then.</p>
 A card in your pocket, and a decision to make.</p>
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